My First Fiction 58

Thought I’d give this exercise a try, it’s called Fiction 58, forgive me for not knowing or giving credit to those who created this format, but it looked like fun.  It’s a short burst of fiction, in 58 words.

His wife arrived after the last shoot. He’d insisted they were separated, so I wasn’t the “other woman”.

His eyes guilty, her eyes dreamy, “PLEASE join us tonight!.”

“No thanks, other plans,” my eyes cursing, parting with Hollywood’s feigned affections.

She looked up, rubbed my lipstick off his cheek.

“She left her mark on you!”

Yes, I hoped.


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